Summer crush

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Aug 2004 · 9 comments

Summer crushs really suck ass, I should of known better than to get so close, so fast... We talked for hours at a time, Now i dont think that i'll be fine. You made me laugh, You made me cry, I've never fallen this hard for a guy. I'll really miss you, thats all i can say, Everything else just seems so cliche. A stupid love song is what this is, Only for you and no one else. I dont usually let myself fall this hard; Instead i acted like a retard. I'll miss you lots, i'll miss you so much, Lets get together soon and do lunch. Summer crushs really suck ass, I should of known better than to get so close, so fast... We laughed at people on the street, Talked about when we would meet. My heart is yours for eternity, Now isn't that quite nifty? You have no idea what an impact you've had on me, And now i guess you'll never see. Im quite sad, you can tell, You caught me, everytime i fell. Summer crushs really suck ass, I should of known better than to get so close, so fast... I'll get better though, you know i will. A stupid love song is written for you, You better appreciate it, and soak up every bit, Because summer crushs really suck ass.

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[9] cat 3-Aug-04/7:13 AM Reply

Since you are 16 I like this, because I appreciate the feelings it give me, I like that you can look at things that happen in life (even the stuff that's bad, but isn't it all about perspective) with a sense of humour...some people are 35 and don't get that.

[n/a] leonxic 3-Aug-04/7:25 AM Reply

No, you really suck ass. Really.

[6] unknown^user 3-Aug-04/10:10 AM Reply

The juvenile innocence conveyed by the writing is definitely cute and amplifies the subject matter. The blaring spelling errors though are just a little too much to give it that Toys r' Us backwards R quality which may have made it too juvenile anyway.

[0] wnot Dovinaw 3-Aug-04/11:27 AM Reply

You are absolutely hopeless. Please give up now.

[5] MacFrantic 3-Aug-04/10:21 PM Reply

Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha!

Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know?

But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*

[5] MacFrantic 3-Aug-04/10:21 PM Reply

[n/a] sk8rs_rule_all › MacFrantic 4-Aug-04/4:38 PM Reply

Sure, if you're going to make a comment about skaters, at least try a little harder. Anyway, stereotype me if you wish, all skaters arent losers and potheads and idiots. Some of us actually have a soul. I dont care if you dont like my poems, i really dont. I like writing, im not going to stop, when i do that'll be the day i die. The more you tell me to stop, the more im going to continue doing it.

(Just from an asshole's point of view)

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Aug-04/6:10 PM Reply

Hey great use of "nifty" to rhyme with "eternity", and "fast" to rhyme with... "ass"!!!!111 -10-

[6] SupremeDreamer 5-Aug-04/9:09 PM Reply

If this were a pimple, It would be nine. But its not, so have a six.