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crying tears (Free verse) by NeeMan
the water on your cheeks burns slowly, sinking through layers of well-spent moments damming up in puddles of despair forming waterfalls here and there freezing in the deeper parts where human heart should be, but no longer resides 'cause it has fled from avalanche snowstorms shaving past vast landscapes occupied by spirit's mates emotions taking shelter emotions helter skelter convinced its Armageddon getting down with logic confusing me, creating chaos by now the mates had gathered up in single file they stampede strongly, struggling through shortcuts of ill-spent weekends expanding in crammed up holes bursting out in shivers cold melting through the outer layer of my mask protecting us but cannot help to crack and tears start rolling.

Up the ladder: Summer crush
Down the ladder: The Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.1666665
Weighted score: 4.7758822
Overall Rank: 11339
Posted: July 15, 2002 12:04 AM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2002 12:04 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Jul-02/12:30 AM | Reply
All right now i really hate you cuz you got no-class and a quick "mouth to pen" beautifulle
[10] sonawrote @ 64.12.116.66 | 24-Sep-07/11:30 AM | Reply
I love it, but here(PR) my opinion never counts for much but to be bashed!I don't care, I love it anyway
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