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Stuffy (Villanelle) by horus8
"Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" I said to the host; as I hung up my coat He said, "We have beer just no air-conditioner." "God, that's a shame..." I stated with leer As I thought of a William Yeats' quote "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" The quote had something to do with peer - - groups going nuclear... Not to dote, but did he say, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."? Because, I'm poor as hell, and sure to mirror this asshole's sneer with a foot note "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" I hate the rich, they're the cream center of fear In all that they see, do, and hide behind moat Did he say, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."? I should have stayed home, I'm in the third tier To hot for a reading of what this famous poet wrote To say "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" And hear, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."

Down the ladder: The Tuesday Dogs

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.818182
Weighted score: 6.409091
Overall Rank: 765
Posted: June 25, 2004 2:51 PM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2004 2:51 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 25-Jun-04/5:52 PM | Reply
"You're the salesman, you make sales."
[8] Doug @ 64.12.117.6 > Shardik | 26-Jun-04/4:15 PM | Reply
It is almost sad I like this attempt at poetry,yet despise the author and his sad attempt at neo-orange county nazi drivle.Try again jerimi handjob.....get over yourself!
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > Doug | 26-Jun-04/7:00 PM | Reply
I only go to orange county for oranges and tropical fish, but never otherwise, unless I'm on duty. Booty duty, lol.
[7] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 25-Jun-04/9:31 PM | Reply
Except for a few spelling errors, this is cute.
[10] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 | 26-Jun-04/11:49 AM | Reply
Tuffy (Villanelle) by horus8

"Pardon me sir, do you have a tuffy?"
I asked the man in the grey trencoat,
He said, "Why, yes! Wanna see it, lovey?"
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > zodiac | 27-Jun-04/2:52 PM | Reply
Fluffy (Squiggle) by Pumice11!

"Pardon me Squire, but dost thou have fluffy?"
I beckoned to the nude boy breaking wind
He said, "pblrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr" then rode off on my palfrey.
[8] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 26-Jun-04/6:41 PM | Reply
Maybe the feature song of a sitcom-style broadway play written by a gay Edgar Poe...but other than that, quite normal, if not abnormal. Wait! Oh. *8.1*
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