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Stuffy (Villanelle) by horus8

"Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" I said to the host; as I hung up my coat He said, "We have beer just no air-conditioner." "God, that's a shame..." I stated with leer As I thought of a William Yeats' quote "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" The quote had something to do with peer - - groups going nuclear... Not to dote, but did he say, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."? Because, I'm poor as hell, and sure to mirror this asshole's sneer with a foot note "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" I hate the rich, they're the cream center of fear In all that they see, do, and hide behind moat Did he say, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."? I should have stayed home, I'm in the third tier To hot for a reading of what this famous poet wrote To say "Pardon me sir, but is it stuffy in here?" And hear, "We have beer just no air-conditioner."

Doug 26-Jun-04/4:15 PM
It is almost sad I like this attempt at poetry,yet despise the author and his sad attempt at neo-orange county nazi drivle.Try again jerimi handjob.....get over yourself!




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