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Free verse № 106625

Interrogation #1086637

by MacFrantic

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Jun 2004 · Edited 26 Jun 2004 · 2 comments

He broke down in midsentence Before an audience of two Presumptuous laughter stuttering To shameful tears Somewhat like admission But much less Dignified Amidst the confession burns A fire A light Slicing through his consciousness His collapsed reticence revealed Somewhere in Brooklyn Eleven shadows enjoy their last breath Chuckling through exit wounds As the feds sweep like wildfire But the rat can't sleep tonight His neck feels awkward The buckle tight against his throat

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[8] Shuushin 26-Jun-04/3:40 PM Reply
2 spelling errors take away from it: consciouseness, akward.

fine otherwise.
[n/a] MacFrantic › Shuushin 26-Jun-04/6:28 PM Reply
Thank you