Re: Deluge by EAger to Offend	21-Jun-04/1:24 AM
Good, if voted *8*
Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE	21-Jun-04/1:19 AM
Sounds too much like only the decent beginning of a more substantial poem. I appreciate the use of language. *7*
Re: Exist For You by WithoutLife	21-Jun-04/1:17 AM
not my genre exactly, but well done. *8*
Re: unbroken bottle by skaskowski	21-Jun-04/1:10 AM
"piss" kind of threw me off, and this is almost too close to prose for me, but impressive nonetheless. Great imagery and conveyance. *10*
Re: Center Of The Universe by Dovina	21-Jun-04/1:01 AM
Excellent, cruel, biting ending makes this work. Would've liked to see it split up though, and the last line should have a comma. *8*
Re: a comment on 0 by MacFrantic	19-Jun-04/8:42 AM
Thank you Deep Thought
Re: a comment on 0 by MacFrantic	18-Jun-04/11:33 AM
You tell me.
Re: 0 by MacFrantic	17-Jun-04/10:24 PM
First two comments from bad limerick
Re: a comment on With Reckless Abandon by MacFrantic	9-Jun-04/6:51 PM
Now, I wouldn't say gibberish, exactly. I used these terms metaphorically, which is ironic when the whole thing is a metaphor itself.
Re: a comment on With Reckless Abandon by MacFrantic	9-Jun-04/6:49 PM
I know! I was so proud of that!
Re: With Reckless Abandon by MacFrantic	9-Jun-04/3:13 PM
If god'swife is so keen on that little *2*, then I suggest that a reason be provided. Anything below a 3 without so much as scant resonance of a rationale is total bullshit*
Re: a comment on Humpty Dumpty's Regrettable Fate by MacFrantic	26-May-04/9:06 AM
It's not a limerick: AABBA Just a rhyme: ABCCB But thanks a lot anyway *CUAO* It says,"see you around" Ha!
Re: a comment on As You Are by MacFrantic	13-May-04/7:54 AM
Excuse me, it is you're not your, sorry for the inconvenience
Re: a comment on As You Are by MacFrantic	13-May-04/7:53 AM
Hey, DarK- ANGeL, I'm sure if he minded than he/she would tell me his/her self. Please, INTRANSIT, tell me if YOUR offended.
Re: Highschool in My Head by MacFrantic	12-May-04/5:05 PM
Sorry, Haiku(s)
Re: As You Are by MacFrantic	12-May-04/5:03 PM
Intransit, thank you.
Re: As You Are by MacFrantic	12-May-04/7:31 AM
First 4 comments are from a different poem.
Re: Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone	5-May-04/4:56 PM
Yo kno thlat feelingg wen your lafghing so hrd its impsobble too ttype
Re: a comment on On the Discovery of High Noon and The Devil in a Glass Jar. by MacFrantic	5-May-04/11:46 AM
*jarred* means -put in a jar- I was simply going for the image of the devil demanding my soul from within a jar. Which reminds me. "In England Smoky the Bear is not the forest fire prevention representative. They have Smacky the Frog. It's just like a bear, but it's a frog. I think it's a better system, I think we should adopt it. Because bears can be mean, but frogs are always cool. Never has there been a frog hopping toward me, and I thought ' man, I'd better play dead. Here comes that frog...' You never say here comes that frog in a nervous manner. It's always optimistic. Hey here comes that frog, al-right. Maybe he'll come near me so I can pet him, and stick him in a mayonnaise jar, with a stick and a leaf, to recreate what he's used to." - Mitch Hedburg (Hilarious
Re: California triolets by zodiac	5-May-04/8:43 AM
I love subtlety and I find the use of semicolons to accent the meaning of the words a perfect fit. Incredible imagery. *10* This is my favorite poem in a while.