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On the Discovery of High Noon and The Devil in a Glass Jar. (Limerick) by MacFrantic
Whenever I think of the West It reminds me of times of unrest When a young, bleeding man With a six-gun in hand Harbors doubts that he's truly the best I found Satan out in my yard He demanded my soul I discard I remained unafraid For he threatened and brayed From within his wee hell, tightly jarred

Up the ladder: Drug Addict
Down the ladder: Desperate Season

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.336177
Overall Rank: 3460
Posted: May 5, 2004 7:41 AM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 7:41 AM PDT
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[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.3.67 | 5-May-04/8:02 AM | Reply
I fail to see the connection between the two limericks, but I do not see a real need for connection... after all we can only post every 2 days. Funny limericks.
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.51 | 5-May-04/11:37 AM | Reply
Help me with "tightly jarred"

Good ones, even with my confusion.
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 204.98.23.2 > Shuushin | 5-May-04/11:46 AM | Reply
*jarred* means -put in a jar- I was simply going for the image of the devil demanding my soul from within a jar. Which reminds me.

"In England Smoky the Bear is not the forest fire prevention representative. They have Smacky the Frog.
It's just like a bear, but it's a frog. I think it's a better system, I think we should adopt it. Because bears
can be mean, but frogs are always cool. Never has there been a frog hopping toward me, and I thought
' man, I'd better play dead. Here comes that frog...' You never say here comes that frog in a nervous
manner. It's always optimistic. Hey here comes that frog, al-right. Maybe he'll come near me so I can
pet him, and stick him in a mayonnaise jar, with a stick and a leaf, to recreate what he's used to."

- Mitch Hedburg (Hilarious
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.146 > MacFrantic | 5-May-04/2:17 PM | Reply
I'm sorry it wasn't you who wrote the frog thing. Just the name alone puts my asthma into overtime.
[8] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 > MacFrantic | 5-May-04/7:14 PM | Reply
Obviously Mitch wasn't in Cedar Grove, TN for the 'Great Frog Attack of '76'.
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