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0 (Haiku) by MacFrantic I called upon God
To explain all I ponder
And He said "Oh snap!"
Up the ladder:
Barflies and Bombshells
Down the ladder:
Kept
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Posted: November 27, 2003 7:55 PM PST; Last modified: June 17, 2004 10:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.2222223 Overall Rank: 961 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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NoSage @ 63.190.65.107
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27-Nov-03/8:26 PM
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My my, aren't we full of ourselves?
such things do boggle the mind.
First two comments from bad limerick
I don't get how 0 relates to the poem. 0.o;
But i like it.
what is "Oh snap" mean?
You tell me.
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Thank you Deep Thought
made me chuckle... its ok. 7.
Great minds think alike, eh?
I like. Very, very much. So very clever, so very few words. I'm not going to check if it's bonified haiku or not (as form and strucure aren't a biggie in my books), but it's great. Oh god, oh snap, => Jess
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