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interlude (Free verse) by Caducus
Remembering that street
and the gown of rain
Which varnished her feet
Her cracked hands
walking over my loneliness
in to avenues of my yearning.
I know this cobbled street,
can lead to doorways
but I chose the exit
In your eyes which burned
like dante's inferno.
Underneath this sunrise
on gingerbread steets,
You look in my eyes
And read to me Keats.
Rain soaked the pages
Leaving a lifetime on her lifeline,
And as she stood still,
Mascara raced from her pallid sill.
Say my name she said
and whisper to my shadow you were mine today,
What I was born for was suddenly dead
As her shawl lifted
Like her feint shadow
She walked away.
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Posted: August 14, 2004 1:23 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 1:23 PM PDT
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Now, the positives........... uhh, *7*