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First Love (Free verse) by Mr Pig
You made me insular. Touched me deftly like a sculptress, leaving me as your masterpiece, To stare at the raging kiln. We had a beginning, You had an end, But I've been left unfinished, Austere stillness, amok in memories. I crack and crumble, In to terracotta vapors, lingering a glorious moment, then dissipating, like our love.

Up the ladder: When Jesus Found Me
Down the ladder: Fastso

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6
Weighted score: 6.3
Overall Rank: 876
Posted: August 15, 2003 9:38 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 4:49 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Aug-03/11:48 AM | Reply
vavoom.
[10] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 15-Aug-03/8:35 PM | Reply
From kindergarten until mid-high, I hung on any piece of info that she might come back. She never did. I never will.
[9] Joe-joe @ 170.28.4.4 | 20-Aug-03/7:24 AM | Reply
Mr Pig,

You be da man! Smooth like silk baby! Again, your work is mature, tastey, and meaningful!! Joe.
[10] deleted user @ 195.92.168.167 | 24-Aug-03/3:47 AM | Reply
wicked
[8] Jill Stockinger @ 127.0.0.1 | 27-Dec-20/3:26 PM | Reply
I do not see how "insular" fits.
Liked the idea of the person being created by the lover the way a sculptor (or in this case sculptress) creates a ceramic piece. And carrying it through, where like a piece of terracotta, it crumbles into nothing.
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