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My two cents (Free verse) by hobojo He will drown in the tide of those who fall
Blood, afterall, is thicker than oil
Generations will pay for the rise of his kin
Repeated respects will be paid
No lessons learned, nor are they ever
The ties are strong
And will never be severed
Cylindrical Errs
One day shall cease
And end will come
Flush
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Posted: August 2, 2004 9:51 PM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2004 9:51 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0397344 Overall Rank: 7138 Comments:
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Dovina @ 24.52.157.176
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3-Aug-04/10:54 AM
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This is good, but what are Cylindrical Errs? The last verse seems superfluous.
You're down two cents for that? Oh well, I would have put at least half of it into Viacom stock. *7*
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