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Free verse № 109693

My two cents

by hobojo

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

He will drown in the tide of those who fall Blood, afterall, is thicker than oil Generations will pay for the rise of his kin Repeated respects will be paid No lessons learned, nor are they ever The ties are strong And will never be severed Cylindrical Errs One day shall cease And end will come Flush

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[9] Dovina 3-Aug-04/10:54 AM Reply
This is good, but what are Cylindrical Errs? The last verse seems superfluous.
[7] MacFrantic 3-Aug-04/10:40 PM Reply
You're down two cents for that? Oh well, I would have put at least half of it into Viacom stock. *7*