Society

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Aug 2004 · Edited 15 Aug 2004 · 3 comments

The darkness of my soul Envelops the warmth of my heart I can see all that is happening around me But I cannot prevent it The cold takes over my body I cannot feel myself anymore Society has taken over me My fashion, my freedom, my feelings As I stand by the fire of myself I gain back what society has taken away I am who I want to be Despite what our society says The warmth of my heart Envelops the darkness of my soul I can see all that is happening around me Now I have the strength to change it

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[7] MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:02 AM Reply

Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*

[n/a] QuirkyWonder › MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/10:58 AM Reply

How sad...well the typos are changed. As far as you passing out, hopefully it was not on the keyboard, that would be slightly uncomfortable!

[9] bwickl11 16-Aug-04/4:30 PM Reply

Another very nice one!