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Society (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
The darkness of my soul Envelops the warmth of my heart I can see all that is happening around me But I cannot prevent it The cold takes over my body I cannot feel myself anymore Society has taken over me My fashion, my freedom, my feelings As I stand by the fire of myself I gain back what society has taken away I am who I want to be Despite what our society says The warmth of my heart Envelops the darkness of my soul I can see all that is happening around me Now I have the strength to change it

Up the ladder: Embrace
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11640
Posted: August 14, 2004 9:15 PM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2004 9:16 AM PDT
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[7] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 15-Aug-04/1:02 AM | Reply
Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*
[n/a] QuirkyWonder @ 198.81.26.80 > MacFrantic | 15-Aug-04/10:58 AM | Reply
How sad...well the typos are changed. As far as you passing out, hopefully it was not on the keyboard, that would be slightly uncomfortable!
[9] bwickl11 @ 67.119.227.58 | 16-Aug-04/4:30 PM | Reply
Another very nice one!
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