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Society (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder

The darkness of my soul Envelops the warmth of my heart I can see all that is happening around me But I cannot prevent it The cold takes over my body I cannot feel myself anymore Society has taken over me My fashion, my freedom, my feelings As I stand by the fire of myself I gain back what society has taken away I am who I want to be Despite what our society says The warmth of my heart Envelops the darkness of my soul I can see all that is happening around me Now I have the strength to change it

QuirkyWonder 15-Aug-04/10:58 AM
How sad...well the typos are changed. As far as you passing out, hopefully it was not on the keyboard, that would be slightly uncomfortable!




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