on If Words Could Explain... by Blindpoetry
11 Feb 2004, 6:08 PM
I wish I was there
on Sweet Goodbye by ashley
11 Feb 2004, 6:08 PM
not many people use the word anew..whatever works. This was ok until i got to "boo" then I just thought of You Got Served. hahaha. Team Boo.
on DO NOT TOUCH!! This is my mega funny-joint! by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Nov 2003, 10:13 PM
what the hell are you on?
on Pumpkin Bowling by un_oying
12 Oct 2003, 9:15 PM
I love pumpkin bowling
umm why is there a penis?
umm why is there a penis?
on Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker
4 Oct 2003, 3:49 PM
i love lime... good job!! I avoided this poem the title reminded me of some fairyland forest thing but I read it and now I feel much better.
on Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Oct 2003, 2:43 PM
this sucks. you get 10's and 8's for this shit and my pee haiku gets NOTHING and I thought of the pissing way back in the day. I have to give you a 0 out of spite.
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Oct 2003, 2:39 PM
You actually had time to make this list?
I feel sorry for you, you have no life.
I feel sorry for you, you have no life.
on Chaos, Time, and Awakening by DreamerSupreme
4 Oct 2003, 2:37 PM
I really was enjoying this until you said "papa".. I can't stand that word, its like nails on a chalkboard for me, I don't why. I think it is because it reminds me of horrible Disney Movies. Dear God..
on Drunken Night by Ataryu
4 Oct 2003, 2:29 PM
really simple and to the point and not confusing and I like it cuz it reminds me of a drunken night.
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 10:30 PM
hella funny! yur so silly
on The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet
7 Aug 2003, 10:01 PM
I would replace the word "depression" with something else like.. agony.. it made it sound so cliche and prescribed.. I hate hearing poems like this.. it reminds me of my old ones.. I got a really nice image thought with the veins in knots.hahah
on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Aug 2003, 9:55 PM
awesome title. great poem. The relationship portrayed between the devil and..well..God as the lady is very good. the phrase "kitties galore" kinda scares me though..hahaha the pink bunny rules!!!
on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8
7 Aug 2003, 9:48 PM
hey horus!!! I haven't been around in a long time. this was the latest poem so I thought I'd sat hey and good job on the poetry (as always). had i been posting stuff I would have said a big HAPPY BIRTHDAY! k..adios..
replying on Charlottesville by New Life Drug
20 Jan 2003, 10:11 AM
AH. The lightning wasn't torn.. It was the sky FROM the lightning. That's what I meant. oops. And another correction would be "barely said A word" not I word. oooooook. hey I'm 14 now. wooohoo!
replying on PHandAcid by New Life Drug
29 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM
dodgy? It could look that way. My friend said she was coming "later" and I was angry..what better way to say it than "drop you from an elevator" a term my friends and I use now..inside joke that happened at a hotel. As for the song lyrics thing, yah it pretty much was created like a song and was supposed to be so the misplaced words and "dodginess" appear in a more poetic form.
replying on pee haiku by New Life Drug
24 Dec 2002, 2:27 PM
umm ok... and why exactly are you telling me this?
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
21 Dec 2002, 4:44 PM
This is very lovely
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
21 Dec 2002, 4:42 PM
I love downtown buses hehe. I just don't like it when the driver tells you too put your feet down off of the seat or gives you a hard time.. or mentally ill riders. The club part is a good drop-off too. Nice...and the last stanza is a great ending. 9
replying on pee haiku by New Life Drug
21 Dec 2002, 4:33 PM
and why isn't it? Not all haikus are orgasmic. If you look upon poetry for pleasure, please don't read mine you spaz!
replying on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
20 Dec 2002, 4:25 PM
i'm glad you like those lines.. those are my faves too. I want this to be moving...