Re: If Words Could Explain... by Blindpoetry |
11-Feb-04/6:08 PM |
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Re: Sweet Goodbye by ashley |
11-Feb-04/6:08 PM |
not many people use the word anew..whatever works. This was ok until i got to "boo" then I just thought of You Got Served. hahaha. Team Boo.
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Re: DO NOT TOUCH!! This is my mega funny-joint! by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Nov-03/10:13 PM |
what the hell are you on?
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Re: Pumpkin Bowling by un_oying |
12-Oct-03/9:15 PM |
I love pumpkin bowling
umm why is there a penis?
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Re: Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker |
4-Oct-03/3:49 PM |
i love lime... good job!! I avoided this poem the title reminded me of some fairyland forest thing but I read it and now I feel much better.
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Re: Often, I'll sit down to pee by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/2:43 PM |
this sucks. you get 10's and 8's for this shit and my pee haiku gets NOTHING and I thought of the pissing way back in the day. I have to give you a 0 out of spite.
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Re: Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Oct-03/2:39 PM |
You actually had time to make this list?
I feel sorry for you, you have no life.
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Re: Chaos, Time, and Awakening by DreamerSupreme |
4-Oct-03/2:37 PM |
I really was enjoying this until you said "papa".. I can't stand that word, its like nails on a chalkboard for me, I don't why. I think it is because it reminds me of horrible Disney Movies. Dear God..
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Re: Drunken Night by Ataryu |
4-Oct-03/2:29 PM |
really simple and to the point and not confusing and I like it cuz it reminds me of a drunken night.
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Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/10:30 PM |
hella funny! yur so silly
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Re: The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet |
7-Aug-03/10:01 PM |
I would replace the word "depression" with something else like.. agony.. it made it sound so cliche and prescribed.. I hate hearing poems like this.. it reminds me of my old ones.. I got a really nice image thought with the veins in knots.hahah
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Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Aug-03/9:55 PM |
awesome title. great poem. The relationship portrayed between the devil and..well..God as the lady is very good. the phrase "kitties galore" kinda scares me though..hahaha the pink bunny rules!!!
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Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/9:48 PM |
hey horus!!! I haven't been around in a long time. this was the latest poem so I thought I'd sat hey and good job on the poetry (as always). had i been posting stuff I would have said a big HAPPY BIRTHDAY! k..adios..
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Re: a comment on Charlottesville by New Life Drug |
20-Jan-03/10:11 AM |
AH. The lightning wasn't torn.. It was the sky FROM the lightning. That's what I meant. oops. And another correction would be "barely said A word" not I word. oooooook. hey I'm 14 now. wooohoo!
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Re: a comment on PHandAcid by New Life Drug |
29-Dec-02/7:40 PM |
dodgy? It could look that way. My friend said she was coming "later" and I was angry..what better way to say it than "drop you from an elevator" a term my friends and I use now..inside joke that happened at a hotel. As for the song lyrics thing, yah it pretty much was created like a song and was supposed to be so the misplaced words and "dodginess" appear in a more poetic form.
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Re: a comment on pee haiku by New Life Drug |
24-Dec-02/2:27 PM |
umm ok... and why exactly are you telling me this?
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Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
21-Dec-02/4:44 PM |
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Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub |
21-Dec-02/4:42 PM |
I love downtown buses hehe. I just don't like it when the driver tells you too put your feet down off of the seat or gives you a hard time.. or mentally ill riders. The club part is a good drop-off too. Nice...and the last stanza is a great ending. 9
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Re: a comment on pee haiku by New Life Drug |
21-Dec-02/4:33 PM |
and why isn't it? Not all haikus are orgasmic. If you look upon poetry for pleasure, please don't read mine you spaz!
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Re: a comment on When Im Gone by New Life Drug |
20-Dec-02/4:25 PM |
i'm glad you like those lines.. those are my faves too. I want this to be moving...
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