replying on pee haiku by New Life Drug
20 Dec 2002, 4:23 PM
depth. I'm tired of depth. You probably don't give a shit about my urinary tract, but it could be anyone's urinary tract. I think haikus were meant to be different. If anyone disagrees, who cares. I like it.
on DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO
19 Dec 2002, 7:28 PM
hated it
replying on no cure by New Life Drug
18 Dec 2002, 8:37 PM
stupid me. I'll fix that . One stanza too long? I wasn't even finished with it. HAHA
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:44 PM
was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.
on killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:43 PM
esoteric? hardly. 8.
on killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:42 PM
reminds me of crap. just kidding, its good. butteflies.....
on with no words to write by nentwined
17 Dec 2002, 5:41 PM
You took my poem idea. That's so lame! I wrote before you though so HA!
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Dec 2002, 7:28 PM
ku-la mira bella. ah! ah! ku-la fon-ta-bo. Bring a torch Jeanette Isabella. JESU!
replying on When Im Gone by New Life Drug
13 Dec 2002, 8:32 PM
yes yes it needs work. Every time I try to edit it, it goes to "Final freedom of Jason" gaaahh. after the glitch I will butcher it. I like the numbers though. They add originality and when I thought of this, it was kind of like a list in my head. I suppose the flow interruption is annoying, but I like to that sort of thing. Take one last breathe and pour out whatever was in my head. But I think it doesnt fit in this poem. It contradicts the whole simple list thing. Good day.
replying on The final freedom of Jason by New Life Drug
13 Dec 2002, 8:27 PM
I'm sorry.. Friday the 13th sequal ahhh. Good idea, but I wouldn't know where to start. However, the texas chainsaw massacre might be something I could pull off
on The Story Of Man by sweetzephyr
4 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
why do people say abyss so much!? FUCK
on Ode to the unwanted chip by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:13 PM
can u have an ode to yourself? SURE! why not! Tintagiles.. be open minded McCain sucks.
on Innocence lost by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:11 PM
totally..
We can't die for our governments...the loss of innocence is demanding..so true.
We can't die for our governments...the loss of innocence is demanding..so true.
on The Gunfighter by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:09 PM
I'm beginning to get the idea you are a great poet
on The mechanics of love by deadstar
26 Nov 2002, 4:07 PM
AHHHHHH this is awesome.
on Shipwrecked... by LovingWhispers
26 Nov 2002, 4:05 PM
goooood
on Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88
26 Nov 2002, 4:02 PM
Oh Christ... now people think you're a genious! ARE THEY INSANE! This is crap....CRAP where is the substance... why must you complain? Why not show anger about it instead in an exciting way. Im dying reading your poetry....
just my opinion though.. dont listen to me if u dont want to... I give it a 5
just my opinion though.. dont listen to me if u dont want to... I give it a 5
on Three pointed star by INTRANSIT
2 Nov 2002, 5:43 PM
my haiku is better. HA.
just kidding this is good. but why did it cost many jewish lives? Shouldnt they be saved? 9. three pointed star. as in half of the star of david? Was it torn in half? ahh questions
just kidding this is good. but why did it cost many jewish lives? Shouldnt they be saved? 9. three pointed star. as in half of the star of david? Was it torn in half? ahh questions