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pee haiku (Haiku) by New Life Drug Pee, I must piss now
here I go! to the toilet!
ahh- relief- oh yes
Up the ladder:
Violent edge
Down the ladder:
-untitled-
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.3076923
Posted: December 19, 2002 7:27 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2002 7:29 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.762824 Overall Rank: 13513 Comments:
Utter stupidity. do you really think we give a shit about your urinary tract. Come on show some depth.
depth. I'm tired of depth. You probably don't give a shit about my urinary tract, but it could be anyone's urinary tract. I think haikus were meant to be different. If anyone disagrees, who cares. I like it.
Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
Pissing....when you really have to go can be somewhat of an orgasmic experience...your haiku on the other hand is not!
and why isn't it? Not all haikus are orgasmic. If you look upon poetry for pleasure, please don't read mine you spaz!
Wal Mart is running a sale on adult diapers...HUGGIES
umm ok... and why exactly are you telling me this?
Seems the form of traditional Haiku, yet the first line denotes no season.
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but not quite a ROTFLMAO.
IMHO