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-untitled- (Free verse) by althea7 Downcast eyes, haggard,
<BR> red and wanting
<BR>Recklessly
crawling over your
<BR> fence , into your bed
<BR>Without shame.
A fool.
<BR> A mockery , a masochist am I
<BR>Embracing your
violent
<BR> climacteric yelling
<BR>Orgasmic at the pain
<BR>
when left alone
<BR>Brain drowned with an
<BR> inhuman migraine
of tears
<BR>Your my pill
<BR> my dear.
<BR>Sweet and bitter
to
<BR> feed my soul.
<BR>
Up the ladder:
pee haiku
Down the ladder:
Kaolin Fire is SHIT
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.7616537 Overall Rank: 13509 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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climacteric works perfectly syllabically, but I don't recognize it as a word other than as a derivative of climactic, which throws off a bit; (and your my pill should be you're my pill). very nice, though. =)
Sounds like a refrigerator-magnet poem, minus "luscious" and "apparatus"
http://poetry.rotten.com/mother-of-all-sandcastles/
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