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pee haiku (Haiku) by New Life Drug

Pee, I must piss now here I go! to the toilet! ahh- relief- oh yes

Ornella Muti 21-Dec-02/1:33 AM
Pissing....when you really have to go can be somewhat of an orgasmic experience...your haiku on the other hand is not!




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