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The Cat (Free verse) by blkarak
The cat appeared, another derelict of the night, out of
nowhere, from some-damn-where, a figure, I'm certain,
guided by providence, trying and succeeding in freaking us
both out,.."What the fuck!" We were prepared, as always,
for wit and rhetoric, but not tragedy, especially from the
annihilation of what was obviously a kindred spirit, a
seeker in the night; we hit the furry bastard, could feel
it beneath the car, beneath the sustained purpose of our
collective acid consciousness; "Damn"'s rang out, seemingly
from everywhere as we pulled over, pulled back, got level
again, or tried, and achingly real; responsibility and a
strange benevolent grace wooed us, so we returned toward the
scene, at the same time, eyeing a cop slow down; the
impossible demands of prudence forced our faces into masks
of sanity and youthful ire as 'Johnny on the spot,' the
glaring, uninvited guest approached us and our carnage with
caution; "What happened," shocked us both, Traci and me,
with the absurdity of the recognizable and plainly obvious;
I reigned in my immediate urge to reduce our hunk of
authority to 'feeblemind mush' and 'idiot gravy,' answering
instead, through a controlled LSD haze, in a supreme
triumph of stupidity, "Ran out in front of us;" the critter
was moving somewhat, certainly not dead, but not up to an
all-night caterwalling vigil,either. In horror and
surprise, we saw the pig thing unbuckle his holster, bent
on destruction or mercy, we knew not which; "Well," he
said, "I guess there's just one thing to do," he was deadly
serious, we saw, and we began, in earnest, to protest this
outrage, when suddenly, stunningly, as if understanding
it's mortality, our furry friend sprang to it's feet,
energized by peril, and took off into the night from whence
it came, blurring into the background of reality and our
brains' "See ya'," we said; smiling at one another, we
walked back to the car and drove away, leaving the
shiteater behind.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2526
Posted: December 10, 2002 12:30 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2002 12:30 PM PST
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