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The Abyss of myself (Lyric) by ciantu
Death by knife, I don't know.. The draining of my elixure of life. It sounds too slow. Painful, irritating Tis not the way I wish to go. Life after Death. Is there really such a thing? If there is not, why do people sing? Why do churchbells ring? It pisses me of, science these days. They tell you theres no god, that we must change our ways. What the hell, this is making me mad. This science shit is really bad. Oh joy, I'm not depressed anymore. And I know who I wrote this poem for. Those faget assed scientologist You can't leave out the scrawny anthropologists who never see the light of day. Well you know what darwin, this is what I say... __ / \ | | | | __| |__ __ __/ | | \/ | / | | | | / | \ | | | / \ Fuck you / \ / \ / | | | | ----------- No offence to the people just the job (Go Naturistists)haha

Up the ladder: For Flight
Down the ladder: The Cat

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2525
Posted: November 24, 2002 12:09 AM PST; Last modified: November 24, 2002 12:09 AM PST
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[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.10 | 24-Nov-02/4:01 PM | Reply
funny how 3 of 4 of your poems have anonymous 10 votes...secret admirer, perchance? or not?
[n/a] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.11.122 > <~> | 24-Nov-02/10:13 PM | Reply
[7] T'ien @ 212.219.142.161 | 25-Nov-02/5:59 AM | Reply
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 25-Nov-02/6:36 AM | Reply
evilution = naughty
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.113 | 25-Nov-02/6:54 AM | Reply
naughty=fun, though.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 > razorgrin | 25-Nov-02/7:23 AM | Reply
I'm sorry but naughty never equals fun. Consider the following function...

(1) f(naughty) = naughty
(2) f(f(naughty))= 3 * naughty

Find the value of naughty (2 marks)
[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 26-Nov-02/5:57 AM | Reply
I've been saying this shit for years.
Every now and then i read something on this site and it restores my faith in the human condition, you sir are ahead of your time with this poem, stanza 2 is right their kicking like a mule. *9*
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