| Re: Stranger by feathers68 |
2-Nov-02/5:41 PM |
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| Re: A Cold Day in March by PunchMeInTheFace |
2-Nov-02/5:38 PM |
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reminds me of a song about this girl who was molested. I dont know if she was molested, probably not. But you describe this girl's feelings well so I give it a 8. It was gunna be 7 but since the title is "a day in march" i gave it an 8.
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| Re: untitled by PunchMeInTheFace |
2-Nov-02/5:36 PM |
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| Re: a comment on i dunno by New Life Drug |
2-Nov-02/5:28 PM |
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I honestly didn't have anything to write about, so I wrote that. The interesting lines that follow are me writing about me not having anything to write about.. yet I do... I think the first line matters. I was going to finish the poem up later on (hence the "to be continued") but I suppose that is the end of the poem. It is not to be continued.. "to be continued" it is a line. And with that, why can't "I have found I have nothing to write about" be a line. Get it now? OH WELL. Just another poetic mistake turned into a confusing meaning by me...
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| Re: Jerk ?? Circle by horus8 |
1-Nov-02/4:53 PM |
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how did you get to be such a great poet?
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| Re: At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit |
1-Nov-02/4:49 PM |
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this is really good. I hate wells though.
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| Re: a comment on PHandAcid by New Life Drug |
28-Oct-02/7:03 PM |
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Yes I can. Can you cradle live flopping fish in the dark with a George Forman grill?
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| Re: a comment on wax by New Life Drug |
28-Oct-02/6:58 PM |
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Oi. You had to have been there... it was funny. My friends and I were just playing with wax.. but I used it as a metaphor for the way I feel about someone....This one is confusing. haha
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| Re: a comment on wax by New Life Drug |
27-Oct-02/7:40 PM |
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I'm keeping you guessing.... hehe
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| Re: a comment on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug |
27-Oct-02/7:37 PM |
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ahhh I hate that song.. whatever floats your boat.
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| Re: Pure by angel_uy |
25-Oct-02/5:21 PM |
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| Re: Drinker's Haiku by cacophony |
25-Oct-02/5:20 PM |
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| Re: Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29 |
25-Oct-02/5:18 PM |
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| Re: Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense... |
11-Oct-02/7:48 PM |
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spiritual moccasins.... uh huh...
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| Re: a comment on the truth about poets by New Life Drug |
11-Oct-02/7:38 PM |
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| Re: a comment on the truth about poets by New Life Drug |
11-Oct-02/7:37 PM |
How??? This may lead to you stealing my identity...muwahaha. I am 13..really.. i suppose there's many 13 year olds interested in posting their poetry or even writing for that matter... but..hey!
How old are you god'swife?
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| Re: first words by decadentlaurel |
10-Oct-02/9:45 PM |
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This is entitled first words, yet it seems like the end of something.
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| Re: dps 2 - new ver. by decadentlaurel |
10-Oct-02/9:43 PM |
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I like version one a tad better, (i say the first is always best because its raw, and meaningful) but this one i like because you've added lines filled with description, which is good, but the atmosphere has dissolved. I especially like the last section and of that "where the blue of her eyes meets gold flowing in every direction such beuty awaits before me still all i see is the ground" very lovely
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| Re: dps by decadentlaurel |
10-Oct-02/9:40 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug |
10-Oct-02/9:37 PM |
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Sometimes to make an impact, you've got to include graphic nature. Besides that, thanks for liking this. I like it as well.
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