on Stranger by feathers68
2 Nov 2002, 5:41 PM
dementia? Oh please
on A Cold Day in March by PunchMeInTheFace
2 Nov 2002, 5:38 PM
reminds me of a song about this girl who was molested. I dont know if she was molested, probably not. But you describe this girl's feelings well so I give it a 8. It was gunna be 7 but since the title is "a day in march" i gave it an 8.
on untitled by PunchMeInTheFace
2 Nov 2002, 5:36 PM
i give it a 7
replying on i dunno by New Life Drug
2 Nov 2002, 5:28 PM
I honestly didn't have anything to write about, so I wrote that. The interesting lines that follow are me writing about me not having anything to write about.. yet I do... I think the first line matters. I was going to finish the poem up later on (hence the "to be continued") but I suppose that is the end of the poem. It is not to be continued.. "to be continued" it is a line. And with that, why can't "I have found I have nothing to write about" be a line. Get it now? OH WELL. Just another poetic mistake turned into a confusing meaning by me...
on Jerk ?? Circle by horus8
1 Nov 2002, 4:53 PM
how did you get to be such a great poet?
on At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit
1 Nov 2002, 4:49 PM
this is really good. I hate wells though.
replying on PHandAcid by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
Yes I can. Can you cradle live flopping fish in the dark with a George Forman grill?
replying on wax by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 6:58 PM
Oi. You had to have been there... it was funny. My friends and I were just playing with wax.. but I used it as a metaphor for the way I feel about someone....This one is confusing. haha
replying on wax by New Life Drug
27 Oct 2002, 7:40 PM
I'm keeping you guessing.... hehe
replying on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug
27 Oct 2002, 7:37 PM
ahhh I hate that song.. whatever floats your boat.
on Drinker's Haiku by cacophony
25 Oct 2002, 5:20 PM
ha
on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29
25 Oct 2002, 5:18 PM
haha that's awesome
on Acknowledgement* by Sigh'ense...
11 Oct 2002, 7:48 PM
spiritual moccasins.... uh huh...
replying on the truth about poets by New Life Drug
11 Oct 2002, 7:38 PM
NOT* many
replying on the truth about poets by New Life Drug
11 Oct 2002, 7:37 PM
How??? This may lead to you stealing my identity...muwahaha. I am 13..really.. i suppose there's many 13 year olds interested in posting their poetry or even writing for that matter... but..hey!
How old are you god'swife?
How old are you god'swife?
on first words by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:45 PM
This is entitled first words, yet it seems like the end of something.
on dps 2 - new ver. by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:43 PM
I like version one a tad better, (i say the first is always best because its raw, and meaningful) but this one i like because you've added lines filled with description, which is good, but the atmosphere has dissolved. I especially like the last section and of that "where the blue of her eyes meets gold flowing in every direction such beuty awaits before me still all i see is the ground" very lovely
on dps by decadentlaurel
10 Oct 2002, 9:40 PM
I can relate..
replying on Francis' Self-portrait by New Life Drug
10 Oct 2002, 9:37 PM
Sometimes to make an impact, you've got to include graphic nature. Besides that, thanks for liking this. I like it as well.