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At the Bottom of a Well (Free verse) by phbiscuit
Dusted then dried
I feel like old furniture
Stored out of sight
Where only the rare roach
Or wayward cat
Will ever find me
The rare visitor
Will leave a tip
Penny, nickel, or dime
Along with a wish
Which as keeper of the deep
Is mine to grant
Falling into winter
Leaves me with a shiver
This stony bottom
Lets snow linger
Springing into summer
Leaves me with a fever
The sun above
Disturbs my broken-leg peace
Shouting is pointless
The months pass by
With only a hope of company
An august June bug may march by in July,
April may realize I'm alive
Either way I am fine
The subterranean pessimist
Sees things only one way
If it is not sunny, it is raining.
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Posted: November 1, 2002 4:46 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2002 5:25 PM PST
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