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DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS (Free verse) by LETO
Forever Alone
were are you my butifule
a hiden love in the mist of shadow
nowhere to be found the next month or tomorow
alone standing ,with in my own grasping, awaiting a hiden hand
from a nonexistent love
a reacuring dream reminding me
of a burnet with bright blue eyes
same as the one that disapearing i left forever alone
BURNET WITH A BROKEN HEART
leaving her behind somthing to regret forever
never forgeting that sadness for all eternity
is none then my own fault
leaving my loving burnet with eyes of the sky
brokenhearted is something ill regret all time
FOREVER REGRET
the oposite of regret that never ends
a sparkile in the eyes of my beloved
reflection of somthing long forgoten
pain coused that unlike her present
i will forever have to live with
MISTAKES OF THE PAST
a mistake of past ingnorence
still huanting my thoughts today
teaching me that inwich i truly want
only reminds me of a mistake echoing my past
A VISION OF THE END
unhapily moving forward
with only sweatness of death incouraging
a future that will end visions of lonlyness
with my hope of seing you again dwindiling
a vision of the end opens my veiw for a new love
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.875
Weighted score: 4.697441
Overall Rank: 12028
Posted: December 19, 2002 4:35 PM PST; Last modified: December 19, 2002 4:35 PM PST
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