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DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS (Free verse) by LETO

Forever Alone were are you my butifule a hiden love in the mist of shadow nowhere to be found the next month or tomorow alone standing ,with in my own grasping, awaiting a hiden hand from a nonexistent love a reacuring dream reminding me of a burnet with bright blue eyes same as the one that disapearing i left forever alone BURNET WITH A BROKEN HEART leaving her behind somthing to regret forever never forgeting that sadness for all eternity is none then my own fault leaving my loving burnet with eyes of the sky brokenhearted is something ill regret all time FOREVER REGRET the oposite of regret that never ends a sparkile in the eyes of my beloved reflection of somthing long forgoten pain coused that unlike her present i will forever have to live with MISTAKES OF THE PAST a mistake of past ingnorence still huanting my thoughts today teaching me that inwich i truly want only reminds me of a mistake echoing my past A VISION OF THE END unhapily moving forward with only sweatness of death incouraging a future that will end visions of lonlyness with my hope of seing you again dwindiling a vision of the end opens my veiw for a new love

New Life Drug 19-Dec-02/7:28 PM
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