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dream dream dream dream dream (Free verse) by nentwined
it's more than a dream that I'm talking to me it's more than myself i dream talking to be for the dream of all selves has dreamed that you see that the dream we are in dreams itself to be free

Down the ladder: overwhelmed

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2580647
Weighted score: 7.256007
Overall Rank: 14
Posted: October 25, 2002 7:19 AM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 7:21 AM PDT
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[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 25-Oct-02/7:26 AM | Reply
This post-modernism run wild - what is real? Is everything a reflection of everything else? And does any of it justify buying expensive trainers? I'm confused by the second line.
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > Christof | 25-Oct-02/2:40 PM | Reply
I... was heading to bed after being way too tired, and had a poem run through my head. I got up to write it down, and lost it, and this was the best I could do to justify having gotten up.

But the second line would translate "I dream of talking as more than just to myself" if that helps any.
[6] god'swife @ 209.179.136.83 | 25-Oct-02/2:46 PM | Reply
I kinda get it.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 216.24.65.85 | 25-Oct-02/4:25 PM | Reply
Yess, and this is really good my friend.
[7] anitawit @ 203.197.210.154 | 22-Nov-02/11:45 AM | Reply
'the dream we are in dreams itself to be free'- anything to do with the theory of 'maya'?
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > anitawit | 22-Nov-02/12:18 PM | Reply
not speicfically, but generally yes. :)
[6] New Life Drug @ 64.175.38.129 | 17-Dec-02/5:44 PM | Reply
was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.
[8] rockinindividual @ 165.247.93.195 | 26-Dec-02/2:39 PM | Reply
oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8
[7] daniella @ 200.68.202.74 | 4-Jun-03/11:06 PM | Reply
you have got something going on here mirrored in other verses i have seen of yours. good going.
am out of here.. spent!
[n/a] nentwined @ 192.168.0.254 | 31-Jul-03/8:24 AM | Reply
testing self-comment.
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.248.115 | 8-Mar-07/7:20 AM | Reply
Boring. And that is a compliment.
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