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dream dream dream dream dream

Member since 2001 · Posted 25 Oct 2002 · Edited 25 Oct 2002 · 11 comments

it's more than a dream that I'm talking to me it's more than myself i dream talking to be for the dream of all selves has dreamed that you see that the dream we are in dreams itself to be free

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[7] Christof 25-Oct-02/7:26 AM Reply

This post-modernism run wild - what is real? Is everything a reflection of everything else? And does any of it justify buying expensive trainers? I'm confused by the second line.

[n/a] nentwined › Christof 25-Oct-02/2:40 PM Reply

I... was heading to bed after being way too tired, and had a poem run through my head. I got up to write it down, and lost it, and this was the best I could do to justify having gotten up.

But the second line would translate "I dream of talking as more than just to myself" if that helps any.

[6] god'swife 25-Oct-02/2:46 PM Reply

I kinda get it.

[9] INTRANSIT 25-Oct-02/4:25 PM Reply

Yess, and this is really good my friend.

[7] anitawit 22-Nov-02/11:45 AM Reply

'the dream we are in dreams itself to be free'- anything to do with the theory of 'maya'?

[n/a] nentwined › anitawit 22-Nov-02/12:18 PM Reply

not speicfically, but generally yes. :)

[6] New Life Drug 17-Dec-02/5:44 PM Reply

was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.

[8] rockinindividual 26-Dec-02/2:39 PM Reply

oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8

[7] daniella 4-Jun-03/11:06 PM Reply

you have got something going on here mirrored in other verses i have seen of yours. good going.
am out of here.. spent!

[n/a] nentwined 31-Jul-03/8:24 AM Reply

testing self-comment.

[0] mr cunt 8-Mar-07/7:20 AM Reply

Boring. And that is a compliment.