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dream dream dream dream dream (Free verse) by nentwined

it's more than a dream that I'm talking to me it's more than myself i dream talking to be for the dream of all selves has dreamed that you see that the dream we are in dreams itself to be free

New Life Drug 17-Dec-02/5:44 PM
was there really a need for five "dreams"? how about dream to the fifth. Other than that its good but i dont get the free part. It doesnt fit. 6.




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