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dream dream dream dream dream (Free verse) by nentwined

it's more than a dream that I'm talking to me it's more than myself i dream talking to be for the dream of all selves has dreamed that you see that the dream we are in dreams itself to be free

nentwined 25-Oct-02/2:40 PM
I... was heading to bed after being way too tired, and had a poem run through my head. I got up to write it down, and lost it, and this was the best I could do to justify having gotten up.

But the second line would translate "I dream of talking as more than just to myself" if that helps any.




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