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Chaos, Time, and Awakening (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
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I have slept sound
and dreamed my nightmare
to its muddy roots.
Fingerprints smudged
the paths that took me there
back then, the day I traveled
forwards.
An eternity of sceneries
flashing before my minds eye
and voices spoke of smiles, frowns,
along with too many emotions inbetween.
The visions became a part of me
when young eyes opened
to dreams flowing via vibrations
into and out of everything.
I smile now Chantal, but I frown
a moment for you,
stuck in the past,
destined to die-
never knowing of my chaos waltz
with the future.
You seek even now to be
cut down, but you linger
since life demands that you
untie your rope...
Alas, patience does run thin
and you are more stubborn
than me, who erased the riddle
before it could appear.
Yes Papa, my ears
hear your voice
and its good to be back
home.
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Posted: October 4, 2003 5:19 AM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2003 5:19 AM PDT
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im not doing it to be cute.