| Re: Mourning Glory by William Delacroix |
10-Sep-03/12:55 PM |
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It's pretty good. It's not one of your best, but it's good. Um, I don't think you can use that last line though. I think even using a single line that someone else wrote is still Plagiarism, isn't it?
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| Re: Wasted Words by ho_hum |
26-Sep-03/1:47 PM |
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pretty good. nice and simple.
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| Re: Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~> |
26-Sep-03/1:49 PM |
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well, I alt+f4 it, but not before saying it's very cute.
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| Re: OM by SupremeDreamer |
29-Sep-03/11:08 AM |
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Interesting piece. What's the Poemwanker award?
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| Re: Love doggerel by thavimatola |
29-Sep-03/11:13 AM |
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I don't really get it either, but I like the reference to the drunkard working at the nuclear plant.
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| Re: War Grave by Caducus |
29-Sep-03/11:15 AM |
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/5:02 PM |
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wow, what a freaking literary genious you are.
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| Re: Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/5:03 PM |
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"last year, my best bud was mown down," were they driving by on a John Dear?
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| Re: Untitled by revy13 |
1-Oct-03/9:15 AM |
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hmmmm not much to say on this one. I like it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Oct-03/4:02 PM |
Your insidious sentiments never fail to raise the hairs on the back of my balls. For you, this is a compliment.
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| Re: Desire by revy13 |
1-Oct-03/4:04 PM |
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suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
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| Re: The Fucktory by horus8 |
2-Oct-03/10:52 AM |
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very creative and clear. Though I'm always against racism and biggotry, I admit appreciating your honesty for fear of "jews and negroids." As is common practice where fear is so freely distributed.
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| Re: angst by nentwined |
2-Oct-03/1:05 PM |
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| Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/1:11 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Oct-03/1:20 PM |
Some parts caught my attention, others faded like night into day, but it might be more attributed to my drowsy work day. I give it a 7 all the same.
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| Re: A London Cafe by mrpresident |
2-Oct-03/1:33 PM |
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I like the message in this poem. I think you could work the lyric into something more fluid, but I like the core of it.
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| Re: the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide |
2-Oct-03/3:22 PM |
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| Re: On the Occasion by tadpole |
2-Oct-03/3:23 PM |
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I like the last line best.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Oct-03/3:20 PM |
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Here's a green seven for your brass ballz.
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| Re: Under Blood Oak by horus8 |
3-Oct-03/3:25 PM |
I like most of it, but there are a couple parts that I didn't feel completely struck by.
This one being my favorite part...
Stretch limbing dusks' arc
The red under your bark
And how you left your mark
On me, never the seasons...
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