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On the Occasion (Free verse) by tadpole Guardian Big-Hearted
And strong of will
Guide me long
Keep me true
Never abandon me
While this earth is my home
Ever from birth
You serve anew
Many thanks to you, and still more
To Him from
Whom you've come
Of gratitude oft'n overdue
Up the ladder:
An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator
Down the ladder:
The Poemranker Poe-lease
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Posted: October 2, 2003 2:01 PM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 2:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6363635 Overall Rank: 2168 Comments:
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
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2-Oct-03/3:23 PM
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I like the last line best.
You must be Native American.What Occasion may I ask?
The Occasion is the Feast of our Guardian Angels.
not sure about the rhyme at the end of each verse, too many words seem to interfere in between, such as whom and you.
overall pleasant,
good poem, and sliver, can't you see that that was about the angels? i knew rigth away, open your eyes :P~
listen here bud. you know better than to question my intelligence, I don't have any.
this is nice - 7 -
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