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An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator (Ode) by tolstoyleo
Tiles blurr'd, then focus'd, then blurr'd. Reminiscing an taco recently splurg'd Rocking to and fro currently deterred Finally a colour of Douglas Fir 'Tis a fine species I say Good Day to you sir Monsieur? I concur.

Down the ladder: On the Occasion

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.375
Weighted score: 5.638736
Overall Rank: 2167
Posted: July 1, 2004 1:52 AM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2004 1:52 AM PDT
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[8] donmiguel1960 @ 68.96.168.211 | 1-Jul-04/6:16 AM | Reply
I like the flow, but have
[8] donmiguel1960 @ 68.96.168.211 | 1-Jul-04/6:16 AM | Reply
have no clue what its about, tell me
[n/a] tolstoyleo @ 65.151.232.159 > donmiguel1960 | 1-Jul-04/10:33 AM | Reply
You would have to definately read the poetry written by "=-dark_angel_= on this site. He has 3 poems in the "worst" section if you didn't know, and most of his poetry is SUPER FUNNY! well... I spent probably 3 hours reading his stuff and was very amazed at the creativity and time spent. Basically. The poem is about taking a shit.
[9] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 1-Jul-04/3:52 PM | Reply
Evacuation harness blues.
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 1-Jul-04/7:03 PM | Reply
Unfitting a "man" of his stature.
[n/a] tolstoyleo @ 4.40.105.212 > Shuushin | 2-Jul-04/6:48 AM | Reply
Totally unfitting. That is why there will be a trilogy of them dedicated to his mastery. Unmatching and unfitting the Aids in a (x) triology as well.
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.165 | 24-Jul-04/3:22 PM | Reply
Still, spot on.
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