poemranker ::angst by nentwined

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Lyric № 67882

angst

Member since 2001 · Posted 2 Oct 2003 · Edited 2 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

Oh yes, I've got some angst, and I like to share it, too-- I've got enough for everyone, I've got enough for you! I've got my black attire, and I'm rolling out some contrast, I'm bleeding out my veins and I'm crying while it lasts-- OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE catharsis comes so rarely, my nightmares scare me daily, I'm trapped inside of 'lately', and lately it all sucks! OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE Now I've poured out all my sins in somewhat metered verse; I need some affirmation or the poetry gets worse! OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE

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5 comments

[7] J.B. Manning 2-Oct-03/1:05 PM Reply
lovely. ;-)
[8] INTRANSIT 2-Oct-03/6:26 PM Reply
need another drum of coffee/espresso/NOS?
[8] Bill Z Bub 2-Oct-03/7:55 PM Reply
Yup.
[0] horus8 2-Oct-03/11:39 PM Reply
"or my poetry might get worse" would work much better. Otherwise, one demerit, therefore, a 9.
Quite funny, but stolen from muah.
[10] LilMsLadyPoet 11-Jul-05/9:34 AM Reply
WOO-WOOO-HOOOOO!!!! *CLAP* CLAP..CLAP..CLAP!!!!! bRAVO..BRAVO...TAKE A BOW!...(flings her red panties to the man in black attire...since they match the blood he's spewing!)I said I'd never give a ten...I lied...You got one!