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angst (Lyric) by nentwined Oh yes, I've got some angst,
and I like to share it, too--
I've got enough for everyone,
I've got enough for you!
I've got my black attire,
and I'm rolling out some contrast,
I'm bleeding out my veins
and I'm crying while it lasts--
OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE
catharsis comes so rarely,
my nightmares scare me daily,
I'm trapped inside of 'lately',
and lately it all sucks!
OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE
Now I've poured out all my sins
in somewhat metered verse;
I need some affirmation
or the poetry gets worse!
OOO Waahhhhh EEeeeEEE
Up the ladder:
Sublime Street Morals
Down the ladder:
A Cup Of Tea & Company
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.92
Posted: October 2, 2003 11:50 AM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2003 12:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.90715 Overall Rank: 227 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
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2-Oct-03/1:05 PM
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lovely. ;-)
need another drum of coffee/espresso/NOS?
Yup.
"or my poetry might get worse" would work much better. Otherwise, one demerit, therefore, a 9.
Quite funny, but stolen from muah.
WOO-WOOO-HOOOOO!!!! *CLAP* CLAP..CLAP..CLAP!!!!! bRAVO..BRAVO...TAKE A BOW!...(flings her red panties to the man in black attire...since they match the blood he's spewing!)I said I'd never give a ten...I lied...You got one!
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