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20 most recent comments by J.B. Manning (21-40)

Re: The Devil & Me by Artemis745 3-Oct-03/3:27 PM
I flows smoothly, but there are a couple parts that I feel were...well that they were for lack of better words, basically. Like, "a God of thunder," I dunno...seemed like something you would write when you'er young.
Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT 3-Oct-03/3:45 PM
I think this is the best poem I've read on this yet to date. Honestly.
Re: Death by Artemis745 3-Oct-03/4:00 PM
"death" is only a he, because you make him one in your poem. Death is not the last thing, but the least thing.
Re: facku by J.B. Manning 10-Oct-03/11:53 AM
*comical...
Re: The Ren (The magic in naming) by Bachus 16-Oct-03/5:16 PM
you are obviously a fuck hole.
Re: paper fragments by skaskowski 16-Oct-03/5:21 PM
wow, I love this poem.

my heart is a pasted paper scrap on my glossy chest
--is a great line

litter the streets of an abandoned bedroom city.
--is the best line

-10-
Re: Spread Deep in Fresh Meat by abecedarian 16-Oct-03/5:23 PM
I love the first line.
Re: does anyone have sleeping pills for me? by FreeFormFixation 22-Oct-03/3:34 PM
Hmm, well, I think you could probably spend some time rolling this over in your mind to come up with a more creative way of expressing what you feel. The language is just very dry. I get what your saying, and you speak it clearly, but maybe that's your angle.
Re: untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone 27-Oct-03/10:02 AM
hmmm, seems a bit dry. The laughing at funerals part has potential, but yeah...it's a bit dry. Like toast without butter.
Re: The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 27-Oct-03/10:06 AM
You see, a backspace is eternally depressed,
Submerged deep in the sanguine depths,
Of illiterate logic,
A child's voice is heard nonetheless.

--nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously.

Good stuff.
regarding some deleted poem... 27-Oct-03/10:10 AM
eh
regarding some deleted poem... 29-Oct-03/3:22 PM
somebody call the waaaaaaaaaaaaaambulance.
Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT 7-Nov-03/2:11 PM
fish smells like fingers.
Re: Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly 7-Nov-03/2:16 PM
was it a wet paper bag?
Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT 7-Nov-03/2:24 PM
she-car
regarding some deleted poem... 7-Nov-03/2:29 PM
The only thing that seperates love and hate is indifference...which is plainly what I'm forced to feel right now...oh no...that's a yaaaaaaaaaaawn.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Nov-03/11:20 AM
very nice
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Nov-03/11:14 AM
I can appreciate the sentiment, but Crystal, the lyric of this poem really comes off like something a high school student would write. Sorry to be harsh, but I think you have a habit of selling yourself short with infintile rhetoric.
regarding some deleted poem... 14-Nov-03/11:14 AM
*Infantile
Re: Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz 14-Nov-03/11:35 AM
I love it. I agree with Tranny. Marshmallow loses the fine wine flavor that permeates throughout the rest of the poem. Good one.


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