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I don't like fish (Free verse) by INTRANSIT I watched the guppies swim erratically.
I wanted to join them.
I stuck my head into the fishtank
and opened my mouth as wide as I
could. Then closed and swallowed
tank water and three small fish.
An hour later I didn't feel so well,
so I went to the bathroom and
threw up in the sink.
Three half digested fish and some
yellow soupy colored tank water.
I felt worse.
Up the ladder:
Arrows
Down the ladder:
Happiness & Old Age
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6923075
Posted: November 6, 2003 12:45 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 12:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.680981 Overall Rank: 532 Comments:
I felt much much worse then.
fish smells like fingers.
LoL! Hey INTRANSIT, did you miss me?
all of a sudden I feel sick, I ate sushi this morning. Shit!
yes I did. now are you going to stick around and write poetry? or are you going to let paki scare you off again? stop writing in french. it's cheating and I can't vote if I can't read it. I'll get around to learning a second language eventually. now write!
With the title, I was partly expecting a Dr. Seuss poem. Cute joke poem!
I enjoyed this. Especially the "I felt worse" I like the way you think!!
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Heres an eight.