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Happiness & Old Age (Free verse) by Caducus
With attentive fingers she played with my hair,
In that sleep inducing way women do.
Will she still do it when I am canescent,
And will her touch feel as genuine?
I see blizzards when I think of old age,
Fearing to be at the wide aisle check out,
With a sumptuous convenience meal for one,
Gurning at Margaret's drooped bosom in a tabard.
Sucking butterskotch,
And arriving too early for a free ride,
So that I can argue with the black driver.
Maybe she and I will grow old together,
But I live in hope,
We stay young together.
I will pretend your gravy tastes better than my Mums,
And you will admire my crooked empty shelves.
But I know my face will be covered in wrinkles,
From a life of happiness.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.285714
Weighted score: 6.670991
Overall Rank: 533
Posted: August 10, 2003 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: August 10, 2003 3:09 PM PDT
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