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From Hell, a Vilanelle (Villanelle) by horus8
You can pack your shit, and go to Hell. But thank you for the one-way mirror. You were never real, just a Vilanelle. Totally Coconuts, and trapped in a shell. My crystal ball has never been clearer. You can pack your shit, and go to Hell. I have a prophecy that I'd like to sell. Of a jejune worm consuming love with terror. But I will never tell, my Vilanelle. Fuck you, fuck them, and FUCK that evangelical New Age bullshit. I see through your exterior. So you can pack your shit, and go to Hell. Narcissistic Pandora, and YES, 'unreliable'. Your heart is a sinkhole, your skin veneer. You were never real, just a Vilanelle. Anti Osmosis, and not permeable Go look up the word whippersnapper. Then pack your shit, and go to Hell You were my last Vilanelle.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.285714
Weighted score: 6.670991
Overall Rank: 534
Posted: December 8, 2003 9:02 PM PST; Last modified: December 8, 2003 9:05 PM PST
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[9] kingit @ 67.69.62.220 | 8-Dec-03/9:34 PM | Reply
Don't need no shit packed where I'm going! Vilanelle? hmmm, uhhh, villain-ess maybe?- ahh fuck, I give up, haven't seen one of them there (French?) dictionaries in a while. Fun read!
[9] darby pyn @ 198.81.26.106 > kingit | 8-Dec-03/11:32 PM | Reply
Punk rock accolades. a 9 for you horus 8
[5] Bobjim @ 81.135.33.143 | 10-Dec-03/1:14 PM | Reply
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Bobjim | 10-Dec-03/3:03 PM | Reply
You know very little, and you have even less.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.154 | 10-Dec-03/6:25 PM | Reply
Well, good vil.. very personal comments here.. feel like a peeper reading them, but reminds me of alot of things.. I'll shut-up now before it seems like I'm intruding.

Anyway- blessed with nine.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.67 | 25-May-05/7:32 AM | Reply
Too funny!
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