Replying to a comment on:

I don't like fish (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I watched the guppies swim erratically. I wanted to join them. I stuck my head into the fishtank and opened my mouth as wide as I could. Then closed and swallowed tank water and three small fish. An hour later I didn't feel so well, so I went to the bathroom and threw up in the sink. Three half digested fish and some yellow soupy colored tank water. I felt worse.

SupremeDreamer 6-Nov-03/1:08 PM
Bad sushi.. did you ask yourself if you had gills first? could have been a good idea.

Heres an eight.




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001