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I don't like fish (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I watched the guppies swim erratically. I wanted to join them. I stuck my head into the fishtank and opened my mouth as wide as I could. Then closed and swallowed tank water and three small fish. An hour later I didn't feel so well, so I went to the bathroom and threw up in the sink. Three half digested fish and some yellow soupy colored tank water. I felt worse.

INTRANSIT 17-Nov-03/6:26 PM
yes I did. now are you going to stick around and write poetry? or are you going to let paki scare you off again? stop writing in french. it's cheating and I can't vote if I can't read it. I'll get around to learning a second language eventually. now write!




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