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Marrowless highway (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Witness the hearse driver,
bright carachters, blocked by the
burgeoning sable seasons.
Busy love-making the she-car while
wishing for the rest of this hemi-life,
this 50/50 mixture that no longer
works and is corroding the free
flowing core. Watch the mercury rise.
The full wide open throttle
position will never be seen .
Escape, the out of reach need,
repressed by systematic crossfire,
a voyager on someone elses' trip.
Red and blue lights of the ambulance
will never flash for her.
Nor for the hearse driver.
Up the ladder:
The Carpenters Cross
Down the ladder:
My daddy taught me about being a good sport
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Posted: November 6, 2003 5:36 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 5:36 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.0555553 Overall Rank: 1200 Comments:
I get it - CARachters; a coinage!
a blown radiator - is one car heaped onto another? car clues: [mercury] sable, [plymouth] voyager, [i forgot, honda?] Escape? hemi as partial - cute. here are some car cues of mine: 16G,1G BOV,2600ACT,AFC,MSD - is that enough to guess what it is?
Based on my limited knowledge of the new "tuner" genre, The 2600 is probably cc's. There's a turbo size in there, and MSD HAS to be ignition. Oh, and you missed (vibe). How'd I do?
some aftermarket company logos too.
OH! the Vibe, damn - good one. And Crossfire too (I missed that the first time) - wait - where is the vibe?
ACT2600 is the clutch. And yep on the MSD (MSD DIS-2). And here's another for you (install to finish this weekend, hopefully) ZEX... ;O)
AWWWWW NUTS! The vibe was in the first few drafts. Front drive or rear? Can't find ZEX in my quickly aging tuner mags, though it rings a faint bell. I otter be wrenchin' on top fuelers or something but I screwed up by leaving U.T.I. long ago. weeping.
Did you read broken ground? tell me why I can't get spark, I'm seriously about to bury this damn van.
Blessed with eight, go in peace.
nice poem, best of the day
she-car
Wow!! That's indeed one of the most unique poems I've read in any of the poetry sites. Not flawless definitely, but better than most stuff.
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Um, that's not what this poem is about. A hearse that can carry the fronts is always a good idea though. ANY thing that can carry the fronts. Does that ponti have the 90-V8?