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Marrowless highway (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Witness the hearse driver, bright carachters, blocked by the burgeoning sable seasons. Busy love-making the she-car while wishing for the rest of this hemi-life, this 50/50 mixture that no longer works and is corroding the free flowing core. Watch the mercury rise. The full wide open throttle position will never be seen . Escape, the out of reach need, repressed by systematic crossfire, a voyager on someone elses' trip. Red and blue lights of the ambulance will never flash for her. Nor for the hearse driver.

INTRANSIT 6-Nov-03/6:59 PM
Based on my limited knowledge of the new "tuner" genre, The 2600 is probably cc's. There's a turbo size in there, and MSD HAS to be ignition. Oh, and you missed (vibe). How'd I do?




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