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The Ren (The magic in naming) (Haiku) by Bachus
The sound of your name through my throat then off my tongue shall be remembered.

Up the ladder: My Queen
Down the ladder: Better Sex

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3636365
Weighted score: 6.181818
Overall Rank: 1006
Posted: October 16, 2003 2:27 PM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2003 2:27 PM PDT
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 16-Oct-03/4:47 PM | Reply
What? No Stimpy?
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > INTRANSIT | 16-Oct-03/5:34 PM | Reply
It's Egyptian not nickolodean.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.198 > Bachus | 16-Oct-03/8:07 PM | Reply
Pardon. I can't seem to find this Ren you speak of. Would you be so kind as to elaborate. Thank you.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.198 > INTRANSIT | 16-Oct-03/8:15 PM | Reply
Found. However, since you have so many, which one rings true? Is it yours you are referring to?
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > INTRANSIT | 16-Oct-03/8:15 PM | Reply
The 'Ren' is the magic of something having a name therefore being remembered forever.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 17-Oct-03/8:11 AM | Reply
Some THING? Or a being? and why the (?) What I found was applied to cats. and I didn't spend the time to absorb it fully. I will in the near future.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 16-Oct-03/5:16 PM | Reply
you are obviously a fuck hole.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > J.B. Manning | 16-Oct-03/5:33 PM | Reply
Having emerged from your mother's anus feet first? I can see why you dislike me and gay people.
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > Bachus | 17-Oct-03/1:22 PM | Reply
Dislike gay people? Hmm, interesting. Where ever would you get that idea?

Sorry, though as much as you would like to feel like you fit into some group or another, you remain the only piece of fecal matter to have ever been given a voice. Don't take it out on your mother though; she really did think she was taking a shit when she flushed you.


[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > J.B. Manning | 17-Oct-03/2:21 PM | Reply
Oh man, you're really on fire tonight. Keep those "great" "sassy" comebacks coming!!!!1
[n/a] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 17-Oct-03/3:33 PM | Reply
Admittedly, you inspire me Darky. ;-) Thanks for the head trip. I am a changed man.
[9] jesslew @ 65.95.232.161 | 13-Mar-07/7:17 PM | Reply
this is really nice
i'll remember it for sure
aw, it's so pretty
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