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Sunset (Lyric) by NoSage
A slice of the Red Sea Dripping slowly onto me In time turning black Until the sun comes back.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3636365
Weighted score: 6.181818
Overall Rank: 993
Posted: November 10, 2003 4:30 PM PST; Last modified: November 10, 2003 4:30 PM PST
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[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 12-Nov-03/7:18 AM | Reply
Nice snippet - makes me want more.

An excellent chorus - Where is more?
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