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Sunset

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Nov 2003 · 1 comment

A slice of the Red Sea Dripping slowly onto me In time turning black Until the sun comes back.

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[8] Shuushin 12-Nov-03/7:18 AM Reply
Nice snippet - makes me want more.

An excellent chorus - Where is more?