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Sunset (Lyric) by NoSage

A slice of the Red Sea Dripping slowly onto me In time turning black Until the sun comes back.

Shuushin 12-Nov-03/7:18 AM
Nice snippet - makes me want more.

An excellent chorus - Where is more?




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