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Paper Bag Scenario (Free verse) by dragonfly He is not my taste.
We can't possibly be more dissimilar,
but I gave myself to him
Shed my clothes for him
'Cause if you put a bag over his head
the man becomes like all the rest
Up the ladder:
Brighton Beach
Down the ladder:
DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity
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Posted: November 7, 2003 1:47 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2003 1:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.799307 Overall Rank: 414 Comments:
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
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7-Nov-03/2:16 PM
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was it a wet paper bag?
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dragonfly @ 67.192.110.26
> J.B. Manning
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7-Nov-03/2:52 PM
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it was when i was done with it
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J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24
> dragonfly
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7-Nov-03/3:35 PM
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niiiiiiiiiiiiiice
well you just did
"Rave" reviews here. The curse of trying to find intelligent life on this planet. Solitude is far less troublesome but no more friendly at times.
I like this quite alot.
Does anyone remember the unknown comic (Gong Show)? He wore a bag on his head too. Did you shed your clothes for the unkown comic??
Paper bags don't help in the matter of political dissimilarity. Are you talking about physical dissimilarity? It kind of works if you are going for a racial message, you know the preintegration history is that doormen at clubs used to hold up a brown paper bag next to a person of African origin, and if they were lighter than the bag, they could enter the club.
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