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Free verse № 74003

Paper Bag Scenario

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Nov 2003 · 7 comments

He is not my taste. We can't possibly be more dissimilar, but I gave myself to him Shed my clothes for him 'Cause if you put a bag over his head the man becomes like all the rest

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7 comments

[8] J.B. Manning 7-Nov-03/2:16 PM Reply
was it a wet paper bag?
[n/a] dragonfly › J.B. Manning 7-Nov-03/2:52 PM Reply
it was when i was done with it
[8] J.B. Manning › dragonfly 7-Nov-03/3:35 PM Reply
niiiiiiiiiiiiiice
[n/a] tadpole 7-Nov-03/2:46 PM Reply
well you just did
[10] ARTIE 7-Nov-03/3:45 PM Reply
"Rave" reviews here. The curse of trying to find intelligent life on this planet. Solitude is far less troublesome but no more friendly at times.
[9] Shuushin 7-Nov-03/9:11 PM Reply
I like this quite alot.

Does anyone remember the unknown comic (Gong Show)? He wore a bag on his head too.

Did you shed your clothes for the unkown comic??
[7] http://mulberryfairy 9-Nov-03/11:29 AM Reply
Paper bags don't help in the matter of political dissimilarity. Are you talking about physical dissimilarity? It kind of works if you are going for a racial message, you know the preintegration history is that doormen at clubs used to hold up a brown paper bag next to a person of African origin, and if they were lighter than the bag, they could enter the club.