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DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos Jazzy blues with soul
Black musics come full circle
Rich white kid's gold smile
Up the ladder:
Paper Bag Scenario
Down the ladder:
you will feel
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Posted: July 29, 2003 1:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 1:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.7955937 Overall Rank: 415 Comments:
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abecedarian @ 164.67.82.153
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29-Jul-03/4:27 PM
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DJ Jeremi spins irony. Huddie Ledbetter rolls in his grave.
Nice job. Put an apostrophe in musics (music's). Aren't contractions allowed in Haiku?
No, they're not really. But I believe the reader gets my poke at conformity.
No yes no yes yes no, I love you. Go.
LOL.
What an Ironing Board. 10.
lol
Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
Haikus**
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