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DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
Jazzy blues with soul Black musics come full circle Rich white kid's gold smile

Up the ladder: Idiot Box

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.04
Weighted score: 7.0263467
Overall Rank: 217
Posted: July 29, 2003 1:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 1:44 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] abecedarian @ 164.67.82.153 | 29-Jul-03/4:27 PM | Reply
DJ Jeremi spins irony. Huddie Ledbetter rolls in his grave.
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.75 | 29-Jul-03/7:35 PM | Reply
Nice job. Put an apostrophe in musics (music's). Aren't contractions allowed in Haiku?
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > http://mulberryfairy | 30-Jul-03/1:10 AM | Reply
No, they're not really. But I believe the reader gets my poke at conformity.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 > http://mulberryfairy | 19-Nov-03/6:05 PM | Reply
No yes no yes yes no, I love you. Go.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 30-Jul-03/12:21 AM | Reply
LOL.
What an Ironing Board.
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 30-Jul-03/5:42 AM | Reply
lol
[7] Bhaskaryya @ 210.214.171.163 | 21-Dec-04/8:13 AM | Reply
Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
[7] Bhaskaryya @ 210.214.171.163 | 21-Dec-04/8:14 AM | Reply
Haikus**
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