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DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity (Haiku) by Jeremi B. Handrinos

Jazzy blues with soul Black musics come full circle Rich white kid's gold smile

http://mulberryfairy 29-Jul-03/7:35 PM
Nice job. Put an apostrophe in musics (music's). Aren't contractions allowed in Haiku?




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