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Spread Deep in Fresh Meat (Free verse) by abecedarian
Hairs napalmed with puss
with their tips coagulated
posed as they were in life
An old wound
I will claw off in chunks
I will scrub with an iron brush
I will carve with a gouge
Anything to prevent infection
I cannot be stopped
Not the faithful duty of tangled blood and hair,
nor the sacrifice of the body can stay my wrath!
Alas, natureâs tree does not shake for will
And thankful germs spread deep in fresh meat
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3125
Weighted score: 6.1560464
Overall Rank: 1054
Posted: October 14, 2003 1:05 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 1:05 AM PDT
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Other than that yes, seems to say something, what will be will be