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Free verse № 70131

Spread Deep in Fresh Meat

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

Hairs napalmed with puss with their tips coagulated posed as they were in life An old wound I will claw off in chunks I will scrub with an iron brush I will carve with a gouge Anything to prevent infection I cannot be stopped Not the faithful duty of tangled blood and hair, nor the sacrifice of the body can stay my wrath! Alas, nature’s tree does not shake for will And thankful germs spread deep in fresh meat

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5 comments

[7] richa 14-Oct-03/7:14 AM Reply
first verse could do with being a bit sharper.

Other than that yes, seems to say something, what will be will be
[10] fuzzylogicisagimp 14-Oct-03/8:23 AM Reply
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14-Oct-03/10:01 AM Reply
If this is your attempt at death metal lyrics, it's shit.
[10] horus8 14-Oct-03/11:39 AM Reply
A joyfull work of quivering rotten will. A maggot pie. a tapeworm pasta salad.
[7] J.B. Manning 16-Oct-03/5:23 PM Reply
I love the first line.