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Spread Deep in Fresh Meat (Free verse) by abecedarian
Hairs napalmed with puss with their tips coagulated posed as they were in life An old wound I will claw off in chunks I will scrub with an iron brush I will carve with a gouge Anything to prevent infection I cannot be stopped Not the faithful duty of tangled blood and hair, nor the sacrifice of the body can stay my wrath! Alas, nature’s tree does not shake for will And thankful germs spread deep in fresh meat

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3125
Weighted score: 6.1560464
Overall Rank: 1054
Posted: October 14, 2003 1:05 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 1:05 AM PDT
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[7] richa @ 81.86.74.6 | 14-Oct-03/7:14 AM | Reply
first verse could do with being a bit sharper.

Other than that yes, seems to say something, what will be will be
[10] fuzzylogicisagimp @ 195.157.153.253 | 14-Oct-03/8:23 AM | Reply
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 14-Oct-03/10:01 AM | Reply
If this is your attempt at death metal lyrics, it's shit.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Oct-03/11:39 AM | Reply
A joyfull work of quivering rotten will. A maggot pie. a tapeworm pasta salad.
[7] J.B. Manning @ 129.44.35.24 | 16-Oct-03/5:23 PM | Reply
I love the first line.
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