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Know the Flow (Lyric) by Miggy
This one is for guy at the dance Who's so scared that he almost wet his pants Trying to dance with this girl, but afraid to ask Thinking she would say no or she'll move too fast So listen up... Try to feel the beat, know the flow, And when you're ready, just go Move your body from head to toe And maybe your feelings to that chick might show Don't worry about her, she's not a hoe She won't leave and look for more As you ask her now she won't say no (chorus) All your courage is all inside You can't do much being too shy Watch as you defy all you deny Just move fly and you'll why You got her hip, don't budge away, This isn't ballet, just swing her way As you move to the groove, Try to act smooth, nothing you would lose If you mess up, she never knew And by now your rhythm should be very true (chorus) So once this is done, you get her number Don't look at others and you'll always have her And when your friends ask for tips Just remember these words and tell them out of your lips (chorus) 2x

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3125
Weighted score: 6.1560464
Overall Rank: 1053
Posted: October 15, 2002 2:39 PM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2002 2:39 PM PDT
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[8] deleted user @ 162.84.177.150 | 3-May-03/4:34 PM | Reply
Pretty good - amusing at first -- a very strong beginning but i think it ended a little rocky - if u revise it a little with a different ending it might be a 10 -- "8"
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