| Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass |
4-Jul-04/5:55 PM |
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Ok this poem was just a bad attempt to be funny and well...It's not..Nice try champ better luck next time..
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jul-04/6:00 PM |
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Hmm well..This poem is so bad it makes me feel better about my poems and for that I will grant you a...-5-
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Jul-04/6:04 PM |
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I dont know who in their right mind would even consider giving THIS poem a 10..It's pure garbage..Thats all I can say..You Suck and Your Poem Sucks.. -0-
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
4-Jul-04/6:07 PM |
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I don't know why anyone would give this poem anything below a ten. Very good.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Jul-04/6:12 PM |
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I liked your poem..Very uh what's the word..Touching..Good job!
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| Re: Girlz by liljsmith87 |
6-Jul-04/10:33 AM |
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As weird as this may seem I think this poem, if edited properly could have some potential. I don't know why people have to be so vicious in their comments though I mean hey, at least you gave it your best shot huh? Be constructive people!!
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| Re: I Shall Fight by Torok |
6-Jul-04/10:37 AM |
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| Re: THE HIT by Torok |
6-Jul-04/10:39 AM |
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Alas! A poem of yours that I actually can relate to and understand!
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| Re: -untitled- by althea7 |
6-Jul-04/10:42 AM |
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Ok Well Im glad Im not the only one who didnt get this poem.
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| Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart |
6-Jul-04/10:45 AM |
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DICTIONARY make friends with it. Other then that I think the poem could have been formatted better. It was OK. I'll give you a 5.
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| Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart |
6-Jul-04/10:53 AM |
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How are you writing about wanting to die at 11 years old? You haven't experienced enough to know anything about depression. This poem contradicts the other poem you wrote. In your other poem you talk about how you're not one of those depressed people and in this poem you seem suicidal? Whatever kid.
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
11-Jul-04/8:24 AM |
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I really like this poem..Nuff said.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Nov-04/4:10 PM |
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This poem was alright I guess...I'll give you a 5...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
1-Nov-04/4:22 PM |
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I dont know why anyone would give this poem a zero I mean, I think its pretty good. Definatly not "Worst" list material.
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
31-Jan-05/5:26 PM |
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Wait...what? I...I don't get it..Probably all that weed I smoked earlier..Oh well..I'll grant you with a 10..The rule on this site seems to be that all good poems are confusing with all the big..words..and stuff..anyways...Always pass the dutch to the left..Cuz the right way is wrong..PEACE
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| Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/5:48 AM |
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I hate you so much that I decided to give this poem a 0..Big surprise huh?
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| Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
1-Feb-05/6:21 AM |
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Maybe this poem would be better if you really knew what it was like to be a bum on the streets; But since you don't there really is no heart behind this poem, just some person writing about something they know nothing about..Oh well...Heres a 6.
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| Re: Lullaby by Goad |
1-Feb-05/11:40 AM |
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
2-Feb-05/9:00 AM |
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I really like this poem and anyone who says anything bad about it is just jealous because none of their stuff is as good.
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| Re: Oh holy shit by Lucifer |
2-Feb-05/9:13 AM |
"Man if I did what I wanted
It would leave you daunted"
I dunno..Thats the only part I like.
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