poemranker ::-untitled- by althea7

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 256

-untitled-

by althea7

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 7 comments

<BR> I place my hand over <BR> my face <BR> on my windswept lashes and dainty <BR> feet <BR> pale and tingling <BR> from the shame <BR> guilty thoughts <BR> to dream that <BR> i for once <BR> had won the tears beneath my <BR> lashes.... <BR> i beheld the torn of my <BR> stature to look upon <BR> your face and see the <BR> reaping pain of <BR> i. <BR> the clinging tides of shrouded <BR> rushing passion <BR> feelings to sooth <BR> my absurd stance <BR> to hope to pray..to feel <BR> what i cannot say <BR> for even when i try <BR> you have turned away <BR> and all i could see <BR> are tears <BR> beneath my lashes <BR> and <BR> i.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.80 weighted 3.80 rank 13475 views 250 View voting details →

30 votes so far. Yours would make 31.30 votes so far

7 comments

[1] deleted user 13-May-02/11:32 AM Reply
"windswept lashes and dainty feet" .... need I say more?
[1] horus8 12-Nov-03/6:47 PM Reply
Shat.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 15-Nov-03/2:20 PM Reply
This is right where it belongs, that's for sure.
[9] capachijim 19-Nov-03/3:23 PM Reply
<BR> yourself into a coma
[0] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/10:35 PM Reply
.... i read this ummmm ?poem? like 3 times and i still have no freakin clue what the poet is writing about.... lashes and feet?? i dunno thats all i could get out of it.
can someone explain exactly what the heck this ?poem? is about pleaseeeeee....
[0] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/10:38 PM Reply
and i quote from the poem " <BR> what i cannot say" ...
no shit!!!! i still dont know what the hell she said.
[0] Brittanyy 6-Jul-04/10:42 AM Reply
Ok Well Im glad Im not the only one who didnt get this poem.